A week now into the new year and I’m back to working on my goal of finishing this draft of Love Burns by the end of the month. Here’s a snip from a picnic scene I’ve enjoyed writing:
His expression tender and savoring, he traced his fingertips over her skin, shoulder to breast to waist to hip, and his warm smile broadened. “You are so beautiful. Kay should paint you, like this, dressed in sunlight.” Humor sparked in his amber eyes and he chuckled. “I was going to say Nate should photograph you, but if he did, then I’d have to kill him and he is my best friend, so that would be a problem.”
Her anxiety at lying so bare beneath him and the wide blue sky broke, and she laughed, even as his possessive joke intrigued her.
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…dressed in sunlight…
I really like that!
LOL. Love him already!
I agree with Dee. He’s a keeper.
Lovely imagery, l felt as though l was spying on them!
Like the imagery!
I like him a LOT, beautiful description of the scene. Terrific excerpt!
Great scene, I loved this.
Ooo-la-la! I like this a LOT! Very sexy, very romantic. Can’t wait to read more! Great six, Babette! 😀
Well done! I loved this snippet. So romantic and sweet.
Thanks! I love writing this couple’s story.
“dressed in sunlight…” Ahhh! I loved that! 🙂
There’s some fantastic turns of phrase in this. Excellent six!
Very sweet. 🙂
dressed in sunlight …I love it too!