I’m still working hard on my goal of finishing Love Burns by the end of the month, but got slightly distracted yesterday while jotting down a scene idea for Heat Wave, so for fun I picked today’s six from that story:
Hands resting on slender hips, his newest employee scanned the dripping disaster that was his office, focused on the burnt-dry coffee pot, and arched one blonde brow. “First, I think we’d better start off with some fresh coffee.”
Then sensibility shoved past Lloyd’s dizzy relief. He was gaping like an idiot again and, while Jo rocked the wet t-shirt look, she was probably cold. Ears and cheeks burning, he blindly grabbed one of the company logo t-shirts from under the counter and thrust it at her, futilely attempting to look anywhere but at her perfect breasts neatly displayed by the soaked pink cotton. “Uh, here, since you’re, ah, wet.”
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9 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday 7”
Great six!..loved the line “Uh, here, since you’re, ah, wet.”
That’s a great scene. Visual, humorous tension. good job!
Hi! Nice job! Love the dripping disaster line . . . who can’t relate to that. Can’t wait to read you books. Michele
What a great scene, with perfect little pieces of description. Sounds like it’s going to be a great scene,.
LOL! Poor Lloyd. He’s trying so hard to be a gentleman. Great six, Babette. I’m glad you decided to share this one!
(dies) Awesome six!
oh, love it when a guy gets all awkward and chivalrous, nice 6!
I love that the girl is thinking first of more coffee. I like her style.
Hahaha! Love that last line. Poor guy. Or perhaps, lucky guy. 😉