Here’s another six sentences from my current work in progress, Love Burns, a contemporary romance:
She leaned into him, relaxing with a laugh. “This has been a great day.”
“All of it?” he said seriously, still weighing what they’d started this afternoon, and immediately kicked himself for not going with the flow and agreeing. Then worry slapped in–the day hadn’t all been rosy for her–and annoyance with himself quickly followed for wanting her, right now, again, and fighting the sensual memories and hungry grip of his body was a lost cause.
He flushed, thoroughly relieved he was sitting and the boys were off with their dad. Only so much biology he was up for explaining today.
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He seems like a pretty nice guy, like the way this is going! Want to keep reading… Excellent excerpt.
good six. I loved the last parafraph
Endearing character. Loved the excerpt!
Great six, I very much like the voice in this work. Well done.
“Only so much biology” — cute! Great six.
I like this. 🙂 Great six!
(laughs) Loved it!
Mmmm… He’s overthinking it, poor guy. Great six.
LOL Very cute six. I love how he’s caught up in his uncertainty and overthinking everything. Makes for a sweet and likable hero.