Six Sentence Sunday 10

5 Feb

What happened after last week’s fishing lesson? For today’s six, we have a bit from a scene following in Love Burns:

“Wow,” she gasped and her delight bubbled into breathless laughter. “Glad I went for the sturdier cot.”
He braced up on his elbows, chest heaving in panting chuckles, and kissed her. “Wow, hell, yeah.” More chuckles shook out of him and he pressed his cheek to hers. “Good choice.”

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18 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday 10”

  1. Alix Cameron February 5, 2012 at 7:41 am #

    A lovely playful six.

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  2. Heather Thurmeier February 5, 2012 at 7:53 am #

    Cute six and a nice moment between them!

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  3. Amy Durham February 5, 2012 at 8:23 am #

    Nothing sexier than a man laughing. Loved it! Well, done!
    Amy Durham

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  4. A.S. Fenichel February 5, 2012 at 10:58 am #

    Wonderful six. They are both very likable. Nice job!

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  5. Dee Carney February 5, 2012 at 11:15 am #

    Cute, cute six!

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  6. Paula Martin February 5, 2012 at 11:32 am #

    Great six. Love how he chuckled!

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  7. Michelle February 5, 2012 at 12:38 pm #

    Sexy six. I loved their dialouge. Nicely done.

    Great six,
    Michelle
    http://www.Michelle-Pickett.com

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  8. DeAnna Felthauser February 5, 2012 at 3:10 pm #

    Cute six! It’s so sexy when you can share laughter with a kiss.

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  9. angela quarles February 5, 2012 at 3:42 pm #

    Cute six, love their playfulness!

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  10. S. J. Maylee February 5, 2012 at 5:34 pm #

    two that can laugh together, very nice!
    fun six

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  11. veronicascott February 5, 2012 at 6:17 pm #

    This is such a nice couple, enjoy the excerpts very much!

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  12. Siobhan Muir February 5, 2012 at 6:33 pm #

    I love the humor in their interaction and the realism in the setting. Well done, Babette. :)

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  13. Karla Doyle February 5, 2012 at 6:46 pm #

    You’ve captured playful, romantic and sexy in this little snippet. Nice!

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  14. Melissa MacKinnon February 5, 2012 at 7:05 pm #

    This is a sweet interaction and great dialog. Thanks for sharing!

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  15. E. Jamie February 5, 2012 at 8:24 pm #

    (giggles) Lovely six!

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  16. sarahballance February 5, 2012 at 9:11 pm #

    Such a happy six! I found myself smiling right along with them. ;c)

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  17. Babette James February 6, 2012 at 6:07 am #

    Thanks so much. I love writing this couple’s story.

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  18. Nick Kelly February 11, 2012 at 9:26 pm #

    There’s a conversation worth having! Great pick.

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