Six Sentence Sunday 9

29 Jan

I’m still attempting to finish Love Burns by the end of the month (I don’t see it happening thanks to some stubborn scenes and busy EDJ, but I’ll keep plugging away) and made some progress planning promotion for Clear As Day. Since deadlines help, I’m taking up a 30k challenge in February and plan to split the word count between editing Love Burns and having some well-needed fun writing new words for Heat Wave.

So, with focus back on Love Burns for today’s six, a simple fishing lesson heats up:

“Now, we’re going to cast overhand here. So keep that finger tight on the line, and you’ll cock the rod back over your right shoulder, so the reel’s kind of pointed up.” He skimmed callused fingertips over her, and drew her into position, his chest brushing her back, swimsuits allowing sun-warmed bare skin to meet bare skin, and caged her in the gentle grip of his arms and hands. “Like this.”

The rush of needy heat swiftly drowned her resolve to be sensible and focused. Oh, yes, how well he’d used those hands yesterday…

You can find more Sunday Sixes here.

11 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday 9”

  1. Amy Durham January 29, 2012 at 8:19 am #

    Ah… very very romantic. Love the description of their skin touching. Great six!
    Amy Durham

  2. Alix Cameron January 29, 2012 at 8:23 am #

    Great use of description. Well done.

  3. A.S. Fenichel January 29, 2012 at 10:07 am #

    Great SIX! Great mood setting.

  4. K.E. Saxon January 29, 2012 at 10:30 am #

    Lots of sexual tension in such few sentences! Great six!

  5. Paula Martin January 29, 2012 at 10:48 am #

    Great six, a description I could really ‘feel’.

  6. E. Jamie January 29, 2012 at 2:01 pm #

    Yummy six! Their skin touching made ME shiver!

  7. Karla January 29, 2012 at 5:39 pm #

    Romantic and sexy–great six!

  8. sarahballance January 29, 2012 at 8:02 pm #

    Oh, yeah! I just lost my resolve to be sensible, too. This is sweetly intense – I love it!

  9. veronicascott January 29, 2012 at 8:04 pm #

    I surely couldn’t focus on the fishing LOL! Great excerpt!

  10. angela quarles January 29, 2012 at 10:16 pm #

    mmm, yummy 6! I think I’d lose my resolve too :)

  11. DeAnna Felthauser January 29, 2012 at 11:17 pm #

    Sexy six! Loved the way you described it!

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